tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1003382769112082541.post1862386686694536938..comments2008-12-24T05:18:28.755-08:00Comments on Flying in the air: 1st draft: Karate-do and Ihanmie7227http://www.blogger.com/profile/05806289905364065935noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1003382769112082541.post-24721562900090723382008-10-14T01:31:00.000-07:002008-10-14T01:31:00.000-07:00thanx for your comment too but can you clarify mor...thanx for your comment too but can you clarify more on my grammatical errors so that I can improve on it. This is because you stated that there "maybe" a few grammatical errors in my writing. Is it that you are not sure yourself? This is because I am confused of the word "maybe". It is really appreciated if you can do so. Thanx =)Ummi Nisrina Adnihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14263430552131637390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1003382769112082541.post-21577499765706859112008-10-13T19:32:00.000-07:002008-10-13T19:32:00.000-07:00hello...ano..is this one of your tasks? uwahhhhh す...hello...ano..is this one of your tasks? uwahhhhh すごい!!! いいですね!!!ne...so what should i comment? bout the contents? grammatical mistakes? hahahhaha i m fail both :D btw, keep those precious moments in your life journal. who knows maybe u can 'story-telling' to your kids? :DcRixhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08218424478334120014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1003382769112082541.post-10934992299909485892008-10-11T17:37:00.000-07:002008-10-11T17:37:00.000-07:00Thank you for your lovely comments. I read it and ...Thank you for your lovely comments. I read it and a lot of you mention about grammatical mistakes. Can you point it out where is it.It would be lovely if you done so. Besides, i'm quite weak in recognizing in the mistakes that i have done.hanmie7227https://www.blogger.com/profile/05806289905364065935noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1003382769112082541.post-17325093612172477912008-10-11T12:30:00.000-07:002008-10-11T12:30:00.000-07:00i love ur posting abt karate!! it reminds me of my...i love ur posting abt karate!! it reminds me of my sweet moments of it once upon a time huhu. i cant be more agree with u, so a compliment from me of ur good content, u express ur feelings in effective way ok gambatelupikirlah sendirihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03539416045925582774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1003382769112082541.post-86844468792607905992008-10-11T09:40:00.000-07:002008-10-11T09:40:00.000-07:00that was a nice job to a beginner blogger like us....that was a nice job to a beginner blogger like us. watch out for grammar mistakes.. maybe we can improve our draft next time. i like the way you use monologue or dialogue i your blog. by writing blog we can reflect our life journey and appreciate our life more...you are a good karate-ka i'm sure..i'm amazed that you are reducing weight and become more prettier and confident nowadays. not only because you join the karate but also i believe the strong motivation that you have in your self. keep up the good work and HIDUP karate! once i was the karate members too. and that was one of my BESTEST memory i my whole life..nEuRuLe @z@Nihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03099179256130680438noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1003382769112082541.post-19583221967870753842008-10-11T07:07:00.000-07:002008-10-11T07:07:00.000-07:00what a fun and motivated story. your story show th...what a fun and motivated story. your story show that we can do what we want if we give our heart on it. Very good attitude when you not thinking about quit.<BR/><BR/>for me to make your story much more fun you should focus more on your memory learning karate. you also should tell more about moral valued you learn from karate.<BR/><BR/>karate is one of the sport beside of martial art. so you should strees on how joinning karate activity can improved your physical fitness.fahmihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15582595042328346029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1003382769112082541.post-78867167462202346012008-10-11T01:16:00.000-07:002008-10-11T01:16:00.000-07:00I still cant do split!!! Karate reminds me of Eito...I still cant do split!!! Karate reminds me of Eito Ranger (although they don't do karate. Heheh!) Your essay was pretty good. Good flow and elaboration. Maybe a few grammar errors that need to be checked. Maybe you wanna add sweet memories you have when you entered karate.<BR/>~some things we have to leave behind when we are to busy nee? I miss those time as well...babysbreathhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10269285550020299870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1003382769112082541.post-27731346867032672542008-10-10T23:11:00.000-07:002008-10-10T23:11:00.000-07:00What an interesting topic to share with us. You el...What an interesting topic to share with us. You elaborate well on your feelings and you managed to capture my intention until the end of your writing. <BR/><BR/>I was once fat too and had a low self-esteem. I had experienced of being making fun off because no one know the reason why I became fat. After I went through the operation, all of those killing and hurting words stop. Your story is inspiring and maybe a little bit of editing, it will be perfect. Good job!Ummi Nisrina Adnihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14263430552131637390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1003382769112082541.post-71581771098927006382008-10-10T23:08:00.000-07:002008-10-10T23:08:00.000-07:00First thing, u have revealed your identity, second...First thing, u have revealed your identity, second, what do you mean by incompetent physically? maybe you should check some grammatical mistakes such past n present and I was immediately took the form should be: I immediately took the formyagamihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14259656937249577778noreply@blogger.com